Seventh Grade Persuasive Essays (NJASK PREP)
Dear Principal,
In my video game Spyro the character Cynder was treated unfairly. She was born by the forces of evil. She was poisoned by the Dark Master and his army and she became the Dark Master’s monster. She tried destroy Spyro as an adult. Cynder was saved by him and went on a trip with him in a crystal for 3 years. She helped Spyro defeat the dark master and safe the world. Like her I am confused about the rotating schedule in Hanover Park High. Next year at Hanover Park High School they want the rotating schedule why? Because the two principals discussed it. I think it is an idiotic idea because the teens will feel downtrodden. I believe this because it is confusing, might not like teachers at certain times and I’ve been doing this ordeal for 4 years now. Some would say that this is a happy idea but WRONG! They say they might like their classes at certain times but what if you have a it in the morning and you are cranky and you would want to stifle with them. Therefore, I will convince you to not use the rotating schedule Hanover Park High.
Basically, changing schedules is confusing. It is confusing because you might not what class you are going to because the schedules is changed around. I am dealing with this in Ridgedale and I’m not enjoying this because on the first day of changing schedules I didn’t know what class I was going to. It happened in my Social Studies class. In that very same class I was floundering because I was confused. I felt nervous but when he called the attendance but I was in the right class and I don’t want that to happen at Hanover. Therefore, as you can see these schedules are confusing, but there is an even worse reason.
Consequently, you might or might not like teachers at certain times. For Instants, you might be cranky and you are in a class that you love. For Instants, this year I was in my Social studies class with a bad temper. I felt very angry and I got in trouble for it. Certain class at certain times can be bad and there is something even worse then this.
In addition, I’ve been doing this for over a year and I’m sick of it. They expect you to know this and then get use to the new one. For example If you keep doing this kids will not like school and if they don’t like school they won’t want to go to school. This is going to have an opposite affect on your school. And do you want that? These are my three reasons but I’m not done yet.
In conclusion, this is a bad Idea because It is confusing, they will be cranky and they will not like school. I would keep the schedule as it is. I think you should have a vote so that the kids can decide. Be warned if you adopt the rotating schedule the kids will not like it.
Sincerely,
NK
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Dear Principal,
There once was a high school boy named Marty. He does time travel and with his old friend the dock he is scientist and he does time travel too. This movie is called Back To The Future. In this movie, Marty gets confused also because he goes to the past instead of the future. In a similar way, if you go with this rotating schedule I will also be very confused. Next year Hanover park wants the rotating schedule because it might be better for Hanover but I say its not good because it might be very confusing for the kids at Hanover park high school and my other opening is if you pick this schedule the kids at hp will be very confused and also it might make them feel stupid. If you pick this schedule it would make feel very downtrodden and it would also make me feel stupid to and I already went through this schedule for four years its not fun its not helpful and its not good for kids health. If you adopt this schedule everyone will be asking the teachers what class do I have now. So I ask of you to not to pick this schedule its not good for the students at hp the kids will be very confused if you choose this schedule no one will like this schedule if you choose it. The reason why I don’t want this schedule is because I don’t want it most of the kids at Ridgedale don’t want it.
In the first place, this schedule is not good for me because it’s confusing and it’s going to be very weird when we change classes at a different time, which is so confusing for me and its also going to be weird when were changing classes at a different time. All of the kids will be very confused its going to be horrible if you pick this schedule I don’t like this schedule one bit its not helpful to the kids at Hanover park. So this is why the schedule is confusing and it will make the kids at Hp feel really stupid and it would make me stupid. So I’m going to say to you that this schedule is not healthy for the children at Hanover Park so this is why I’m going to tell you about a better schedule that we could arrange this schedule can be better than the one that were using in Ridgedale I think this one is going to change Hanover park high school its I will tell you about this schedule now kids would have 1 our class period starting with science and then GYM and after that period COM marts and you can name what period you want next. I think what I came up with is much better than the rotating schedule because its not confusing and it will definitely not make me or the students of Hanover park make them feel stupid. So for that schedule would you agree with me or not? Because I think the schedule is very helpful. Perhaps we can do the schedule that I said it’s much better than the other rotating schedule the rotating schedule is so confusing to other kids. So out of curiosity say if your late for school than its going to be much more confusing for the other kids at Hanover park high school. So do you see this that this schedule is not good for the kids at Hp. Which leads me to my last point.
This idea is bad for the students’ health. All of the students will become confused and after all Mr. Majeski said we do not want to overwhelm the students of Ridgedale Middle School. And if people get overwhelmed then they have a nervous breakdown. It would be very bad for their health and you would have to deal with their parents. When I was in the third grade I got a rash because I was so confused I did not know were I was going my mom blamed the principal. Now how would you feel if a bunch of parents came in and started blaming you what would you do than? Also it would be bad for your health because say if you don’t get up early enough and you don’t get breakfast than you have gym in the morning your going to feel sick to your stomach. As you can see health is important to kids because they are the future in life, so please do not consider this schedule good because its not its not good what so ever.
Therefore this schedule is not healthy its confusing and not good for the school. Instead of the rotating schedule why not have your class once a day? So for instance, have your class every other day. This would work because a longer period means more learning.
Sincerely,
TB
